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lauantai 20. elokuuta 2011

(C) Ann-Christine Lindström

Joy

morning dew on moss
reflecting sunbeams through haze
reveals yellow gold

...is this a Haiku .... is haze one or two syllables ...one according to pronounciation, two according to spelling .... so.... is this a Haiku?

this is what happens when you combine art and science ;)


2 kommenttia:

  1. It's a Haiku... and it's perfect. I was transported to a walk in the woods and coming onto a patch of moss. Thank you.
    Juan

    VastaaPoista
  2. Thanks Juan! I´m glad you liked it. In the Finnish language haze would be two syllables ha-ze ...we pronounce every vowel ... that made me uncertain, but in the English language syllables are counted according to pronounciation then .... and: the yellow gold is mushrooms! Chantarelles! :))

    VastaaPoista